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Title: polarbock: Untouchable (raw draft version)
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Artist: Herult_Hennereg
Genre: Alternative/Punk: Metal
Reviewed by: skyline on September 28, 2007 (All reviews by skyline)

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1Overall Description
Overall a great song that slightly lacks in variety and is obviously is not done. The final version would likely be given 4 or 4 1/2 stars (if it were possible) from me, as this is really good for what bit is here.
 
2Creativity Description
This song while good on the whole seems like it uses an awful lot of repetition in certain segments. I understand the drum fill that keeps playing is sort of the "theme" in terms of the drums but it is somewhat overused to my ears. The melody and bassline do not change throughout the entire piece which makes it slightly uninteresting to listen to. This was possibly intended so people focus on the lyrics more, but I'm calling it as I see it.
 
3Artistic License Description
A good song with a good vision and decent lyrics. The mixing was done very well and everything fits as a whole. Nothing spectacular here, nothing mind blowing, but for what it is - it works.
 
4Arrangement Description
Overall solid job on mixing. The panning is excellent and really flushes things out. Like I mentioned before, the biggest thing I can think of to improve is to include a bit of a changeup in bassline or melody or anything to make it slightly more interesting to listen to. Not every piece does this or is intended to do this, so it may be personal preference that is talking.
 
5Sound Quality Description
Tuning is proper, mixing is good, everything blends well. The mixing could use a slight bit of improvement on the low end to flesh things out but that is a very, very minor complaint.
 
6Vocals Description
The lyrics and all of that are great, but the voice needs to be brought out a touch more in comparison to the rest of the song. Just a *touch* more. Then it will be perfect.
 
7Does it work as a piece of music Description
This undoubtedly stands as a piece of music and will when finished. I can't rate it a 5 because it isn't done.
 
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