Yes, finding the sweet spot for mixing is very tough - it's totally understandable. Thank you for being a real musician/artist and not flipping out about "I deserve 5 stars!!" like some others I've encountered. I appreciate it. :)

You are right about mixing. I never done anything concerning postprocessing with my music, so I might want to learn myself that. As for the discordant parts: I cannot hear them on my equipment (both headphone amplif. + headphone and my audio installation). However, when I listened to this song on equipment that wasnt mine, I heard discordance and other stuff that wasnt intended to be, like the muddled sound you speak about. In contrast, the music on my system is pretty lucid. Logical, since the song was written with that what i hear. But perhaps I want to write multi-audio-system-compatible music b/c this isnt the first time I hear people say this. Im glad you liked the song and shall take suggestions for future music. I definitely dont take the review as a dig. Its good to hear some feedback from one who scrutinizes your music. Its a guide to make one's music better. So, thanks for reviewing!