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Title: You're Lonely
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Artist: Output Jack
Genre: Electronica: Trance
Reviewed by: Space Walk on October 19, 2007 (All reviews by Space Walk)

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1Overall Description
The artist of this tune, was bored and at work. He downloads FL into the PC at work. What he does is a Trance and Dance kind of tune which actually sounds good. I wonder is it that one is more creative when bored or is it the kick that you might lost your job if caught that makes a tune sound like this?.

This music is good, it has deep bass, heavy beat, cool atmospherics and a nice melodic theme which is a union of chopped synths with 303 lines. The nature of the tune is almost a dance and musical structure remain the very same during its duration. The music does not offer much varieties at all but instead uses some clever breaks to keep it fresh.

At first I was going to score this tune a 3, because it's actually repetitive and no matter how beautiful it makes the listener a bit tired of listening, but then I read that you said (The thing about my music is that I usually make songs with vocals in mind) So I changed my mind and gave it a score of 4. But just to give you an idea if you keep your vocals in your mind, then break the music and make it shorter, otherwise they sound dull after a while.

Now what you should do is to go to work, download a whole arsenal of VSTs and start making another one ;o)
 
2Creativity Description
For a bored person at work this is not only creative and original, you should even win an Oscar or even a Nobel prize, or perhaps there are some top quality sound cards installed on the PCs where you work, together with some top notch headphones at your service to make music at work, or maybe you work in a music studio.

If I get bored at my work, all I can do is go online and pay my bills from work. Stick to yours ;o)
 
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4Arrangement Description
The 303 in this tune has taken over the roll as main melodic body of the music which I liked a lot. The chopped synthi goes well with the analog lines. The bass lines are cool and run between to kicks changing keys but are ground shaking and deep. Breaks are used wisely not to destroy the feelings of the tune or make it even more repetitive. The drums are good and I did enjoy that nice snare in the music. deep and heavy beat, kind of tells you come on move that ass. nice atmospherics and depth within this song makes it suitable for dance-to-trance. good work
 
5Sound Quality Description
Clear instruments. Proper tuned too. I love the sound of groove analog gears like the TB-303 the sound is so blubby and bubbly.

I would work on volume corrections for the overall tune, and perhaps use a somewhat slighter volumes on the high freq instruments and hi-hats. Other than that this tune works just fine.
 
6Does it work as a piece of music Description
 
Comments
Oct 22 2007 5:35 am
by Output Jack
Hehe, my work computer doesn't even have internet :P Neither does it have a seperate sound card. And the small speaker boxes I brought there from home doesn't play bass. I try to use my eyes instead :D New song up btw! This one is NOT created at work nor with vocals in mind... only music without "verses". Ended up quite energic :) Check out "Memories of The Future"