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Title: DJ Don Mario-The Holy Ring
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Artist: johan152
Genre: Other: Other
Reviewed by: K-Lyd on July 31, 2007 (All reviews by K-Lyd)

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1Overall Description
hmm, its a very random track, a lot of things dont seem to be in tune.. I don't know whether that was your intention but it doesn't quite work out, its a bit harsh on the ears, kinda reminds me of the time i did a large amount of ketamine...I'm assuming that you have just overlayed samples for the majority of the song? you need to focus on maintaining a rythm thats in tune and melodical and not something that doesn't fit into your song well. there seems to be no direction to the song and your panning the song for a period of time that is far too long ... keep at it though as practise makes perfect ;)
 
2Creativity Description
The creativity of the song is there, but does need some work, I'd suggest dropping a lot of the parts that are not in tune in favour of a more sustained melody.
 
3Artistic License Description
the samples do not work well together, its mish-mashed and hard to understand what direction the song is going..
 
4Arrangement Description
Transitions need work, its not a good idea to go from rock to hardcore then stick in some orchestral, its overpanned for periods of time to either speaker.
 
5Sound Quality Description
It could do with some mastering and a bit of eq'ing for the majority of the song, The instruments sound like they may be sampled so you need to find samples that are in a working key with each other.
 
6Does it work as a piece of music Description
This track does not work well, it kinda sounds like you got bored from the start and just added random samples into the track, it needs some mastering and imho would be a hard track to get sounding right from any producers point of view.
 
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