Geez, that's harsh. There's more to music than sound quality and creativity, and this song happens to have a very good arrangement, well above average for this genre, despite the awful mixing and lack of total originality.

Its a shame that this song doesn't have that mixing that it needs to become good. It's also a shame that it's extremely happy and cheesy. I'm sure that there are tons of songs out there that try do to what you do here.