Poolside - Electrik (Work In Progress)

By: TwiTerror

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Added: 11/01/2007
Length: 1:28

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Urban/Hip-Hop: Hip-Hop/Rap
Rock/Pop: Pop
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Artist's description:
Okay, so I'm working on this song for my 'band.' This is kind of the same idea as you hear in "Let it Live," with some very obvious differences. It's not glitchy, it's not rocky, but it's hiphop. :o

I guess I'm just looking for feedback to help build on the song :D
Anyway, it's definitely not done, but let me know what you think.

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Reviewed by Taroeel on Nov 01, 2007
Done very professional. There are no flaws. Everything is in time. Everything is clear. Some experimental style stuff but still in the realm of traditional harmony. This song is electric.... Read full review
 
Reviewed by Spectra on Nov 01, 2007(0 agree, 1 disagree)
Very addictive (as expected from TwiTerror's Poolside tracks), but with a refreshingly experimental edge that puts it a step above other Poolside tracks. Has a smooth hip-hop feel, nothing hard... Read full review
 
Reviewed by cruzbishop on Nov 02, 2007
Well... first off: WOW! Your voice just seems to blend in with the instruments.... Read full review

Comments
Nov 02 2007 6:07 am
by cruzbishop
O_O Just... wow...



Nov 02 2007 2:27 am
by Space Walk
The music sounds fresh, but I miss the melody in it. This should work fine as an intro to the song though. Your own voice does match the instruments so it's a good choice. Try to work with the depth of the music.



Nov 01 2007 11:23 pm
by Eyspire
Very very good so far. Perhaps build up the beat a little, during the chorus add some hi hats and a grungy sine or square wave bass. If you're worried not being able to build on it further, to take it to a say 3 or 4 minute mark, try adding in a bridge (you've already got the verses and chorus), it'll add more variation to the track. Additionally, nice vocals - if you're feeling risky, add a beefy retrigg to parts of it! {



Nov 01 2007 10:36 pm
by Din
I don't normally like rap, but this is pretty good. I'm leaning toward heavy, crunchy guitars backed up with some staccato synth work. >:D



Nov 01 2007 4:35 pm
by TwiTerror replying to Tympanic
You think so? Going crazy rock with it? I like the idea, I never really thought to go that direction. But as it is I am stumped. (:



Nov 01 2007 4:33 pm
by Tympanic
Okay so it pretty much sounds like an intro as is. It definitely needs to kick it into high gear with some electric guitars or some scratchy type of sounds. Sharp-sounding drums would be good too. I like it so far though.



Nov 01 2007 2:22 pm
by pilot7
kinda.. fresh. thought the drums could use a bit more variations, some of those stuttering hats? i dunnooo. vocal fx feels smooooth. (and weird! in a good way) make's me want more.



Nov 01 2007 1:51 pm
by ralesk
Considering it’s hip-hop, it’s pretty good so far :)

Lyrics

Hey shorty shorty make it right
Make it right now let's not fight
You're the one I pick tonight
Let's get it...
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