Thanks Tricky. I think you'r right. Some instruments a really a bit too dominant. that's why I appreciate your comment, so I can improve my song

The track has potential, but I got to note that the mixing is a bit flawed making some instruments a bit too dominant. Surely this track doesn't "suck". It has a good melody and is pretty enjoyable to listen to, but there's much room for improvement here

very relaxing song! I like the part that starts at 1:45 the most. Usually i expect some dance music from you but this kind of music is something you must go on with!! Great!