Needs a more colorful sub bass...eh? I agree, and it certainly can't hurt. But, on the other hand, any clues where to find one/ how to make one (most of the sample cds I buy mostly have basses that sound a bit like analogue-synth garbage). :-D Thank you for being so optimistic about things...it's obvious we're both looking to improve. :-)

Nice atmosphere. Good drum programming, I dont know how much I liked the voice/choir thing. That highly subjective tho.. It would be interesting with a more colorful bass, the bass is rather monotonus now, just like sub basses tend to be ; P Dont misunderstand, the bass works good as it is. Its just my opinion on it. Like the psy'ish part. Added a good variation to it. Good job. And thanks for comments btw. Very interesting to read your take on the stuff and I agree with all of what you said

dude this is cool break beat ambient ..very good

very good! I like this a lot. until the middle steel drum like section I expected singing - but not afterward.