No problem mate... Try applying a little reverb on the guitar and maybe try it on the hats and snare and see for yourself how that sounds... Use Multiband compressor for mastering the main song and parametric EQ2 to adjust the sequence on the bass and the rest. You could also try applying stereo enchancer to give a better stereo feeling on certain instruments for the background... experiment a lot :D

You need to apply some effects on that FL Slayer , sounds too shallow! Good awareness on drumming but they sound poor due to lack of reverb and other needed effects... Fruity Loops has too much potentials which you should learn how to use.

Cool noise, huh? Well, this track is certainly very cool, a track I would surely listen to again.