Love the beat, panning fx on the vocals are cool too. Some great stuff there for someone that doesn't do hiphop.

Chunky beats with a little rock and that "damn the man" attitude. Very potent substance in the lyrics carries well in the song. On the whole, this shows you are a versatile artist. Big ups to your friend who did the lyrics.

Thank you all....I must make sure everyone is aware, though, that I am NOT the one doing the vocals. My friend recorded the lyrics for me and I wrote the song around them. I can't write words that poignant. I'm not a lyricist (yet).

Maaan, you are a truly talented guy!

fantastic, that guitar bit at the end mixed with the drums is brilliant

Yeah, I need to do a little more work in the mixing process. Thank you for the kind words clones

Thank you Likuid. I'm pleased that both you and your wife were entertained.

This is awesome - excellent lyrics, excellent music - only quibble is that the voice seems to get buried a touch about half way through. Please pass my respect to your lyricist friend.

hrmm... the paragraphs messed up. :( ah well.

We've lost the moral majority to an immoral ethic minority. We've confused law with morality (which works out quite well for the class ideology) good lines. I guess you went for a straight no frills hip hop. I think it worked well for these lyrics. I could see an expanded version with one of the stanzas acting like a chorus and working in a instrumental part... but that is really personal taste. I think this works fine. I really enjoyed the beat you used for it. Very heavy and pronounced, which is what I expected. Good message, good beats, great delivery.

Fucking awesome Orkabot! Really enjoyed, even though I do not like rap. The guitar pad is G-R-E-A-T and the drums... what can I tell about the drums... My wife and I are still impacted... Good job my friend!!