Hi klappspaten, All together the track is nice. It has a good length (especially it's not too short) and I didn't hear any major showstoppers. It's nothing that stays in your mind for very long, but it's a start. What I miss the most is some structure. The music fades from one melody into another, but there's some catchyness missing that helps memorizing it. Creating a catchy piece is not too difficult, though. Many composers start with strings, maybe just a violin or cello, with wich they create the base of the track. You can still easily change parts you find lacking after some hearing. Using that base you can add whatever you find pleasing, e. g. brass or a piano, ... If you can send me the piece as a midi file (or better even as a score) I can also tell you something about some not-so-obvious flaws I might find.