to me , it is nt for dance bt it is to LISTEN :) mixing is as good as always u do :) a bit repetative but cleverly composed (as ASH says) overall a good piece of muzic .. i enjoyed it ....

Great!

Totally a good track S7. Mix is very good. I like the way the rhythm is added at the intro. I also felt a Jean Michel Jarre vibe in the song as mentioned at renoise forums. The only complaint is that the song is even and repetitive to my ears, although you have tried to apply clever hidden variations. I think extra working on this track can make it a very good one indeed. Sorry for my late comment ;)

Structure is bit funny... may be too monotonic.

This is clever writing, s7. I'd almost say that this is too intellectual to really be danceable, which isn't a bad thing! It's the sort of music that you have to *listen* to. I really like the way the various lines weave in and out of each other. It would have been good if there was a 'B' section, so that it was in, say, ternary form (ABA) -- it felt as though it was on the cusp of suddenly moving to the relevant major or something. To me, that would've pushed it up to five stars. Great work as always.